A young woman returns to her home by walking at night after a long work day. While she is walking, she thinks of her cat and cannot wait to hug it. During her childhood she didn't like pets, but after

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A young woman returns to her home by walking at night after a long work day. While she is walking, she thinks of her cat and cannot wait to hug it. During her childhood she didn't like pets, but after her moving abroad, she saw how somebody went to dump a little cat in a dark and durty street, so she couldn't stand it and she steped in. Now she is happy because her cattie keeps her company as she doesn't get to used to loneliness.

Jan 5, 2025 12:12 AM

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A young woman returns to her home by walking at night after a long work day. While she is walking, she thinks of her cat and cannot wait to hug it. During her childhood she didn't like pets, but after she moved abroad, she saw someone dump a little cat in a dark and dirty street. She couldn't stand it and had to step in. Now she is happy because her cat keeps her company - as she just couldn’t see getting used to being alone.

Good job Angie. I got rid of some excessive words

January 5, 2025

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