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More and more people are getting sick including my neighbors and builders working in our renovation project. This afternoon at 1 pm, the project manager was supposed to be there to meet the person who was going to redeploy the gas pipes, but he told me that he was showing all the symptoms of Covid and couldnât come over. Later, he continued that he couldnât find builders to work tomorrow because they caught the virus too. He had planned to clean up the site after the electrician and plumber finished their job and left many construction trashes. However, he soon found that all the workers including trash truck drivers caught the virus. Therefore, the project is on hold again. I hope they all are getting better and will recover quickly.
Dec 16, 2022 3:55 PM
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Increasingly, people are getting sick from Covid, including my neighbors and the builders working on our renovation project. This afternoon at 1 pm, the project manager was supposed to be here to meet the worker who was going to relocate the gas pipes. But earlier, the manager told me that he himself has all the symptoms of Covid and can't come over. Later, he told me he couldnât find any workers for tomorrow because they had all caught the virus. The manager had also planned to come tomorrow to clean up the construction debris left by the electrician and plumber after they finished. However, he soon found out that the construction waste truck driver had also caught the virus. Therefore, the project is on hold again. I hope they all are getting better and will recover quickly.
A lot of tricky tenses here, good job.
December 17, 2022
More and more people are getting sick, including my neighbors and builders
working on our renovation project. This afternoon at 1 pm, the project manager
was supposed to be there to meet the person who was going to redeploy (relay?) the gas
pipes, but he told me that he was showing all the symptoms of Covid and couldnât
come over. Later, he told me that he couldnât find builders to work tomorrow
because they have caught the virus too. He had planned to clean up the site after the
electrician and plumber had finished their jobs and left a lot of construction waste.
However, he soon found that all the workers including trash truck drivers have caught
the virus. Therefore, the project is on hold again. I hope they all are getting
better and will recover quickly.
Seems to have really taken hold from what I am reading.
December 17, 2022
More and more people are getting sick including my neighbors and THE builders working ON our renovation project. This afternoon at 1 pm, the project manager was supposed to be there to meet the person who was going to RELOCATE the gas pipes, but THE PROJECT MANAGER told me HE HAD all the symptoms of Covid and couldnât come over. Later, he SAID that he couldnât find builders to work tomorrow because they had caught the virus too. He had planned to clean up the site BECAUSE the electrician and plumber HAD finished their job BUT LEFT BEHIND A LOT OF TRASH (SINGULAR NOUN). However, he soon found that all the workers including THE trash truck drivers had caught the virus. Therefore, the project is on hold again. I hope they all are getting GET better and will recover quickly.
The paragraph is very good. The changes I made were mostly for clarity.
December 16, 2022
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JessieđIsabella
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English
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