In our county.Luner new year is very impartant and grand for us.It's the end of the year.In a young girl.We hope we could have an Luner year everyday.In that day,we can eat all kind of food,furit and

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In our county.Luner new year is very impartant and grand for us.It's the end of the year.In a young girl.We hope we could have an Luner year everyday.In that day,we can eat all kind of food,furit and wear new_beautiful clothes.At the same time. we can recive a red bag.But with the time going.We are grow up.We even afaird of the end of every.Because we have to buy these thing I just said.If we aren't work hard enough.we would't want to back to home.We have't enough money that means we aren't succeaaful enough.

Jan 14, 2021 10:35 AM

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In our country, Lunar new year is very important and grand for us. It's the end of the year in the Chinese Calendar (sometimes need extra explanation on something that may seem new for others). In a young girl(??), we hope we could have a Lunar new year everyday. During that day, we can eat all kind of food, fruit, and wear new beautiful clothes. At the same time, we can recive a red envelope. But as we grow up, we become even more afraid of this moment because we have to buy these things I just mentioned above. If we don't work hard enough, we wouldn't want to go back home. We haven't had enough money, which means that we aren't successful enough.

-To tell something that has happened and finished in the past: S+ had/had not(hadn't) + v3 + adverb Nice one, keep going!! 😁加油💪

January 14, 2021

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