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Yuna
Today, I went to Shinjuku to look for a keychain that my mother wanted. Unfortunately, it was sold out, but I ended up buying a lot of stickers instead.šAfter that, I went back to school to attend my English class about prophecy, and then I headed to my part-time job. The restaurant was extremely busy, and customers kept coming in until about ten minutes before closing time. Because of that, I finished work about thirty minutes later than usual. I was really tired by the end of the day, but Iām excited because Iām going to hang out with my friend tomorrow. I hope we have a great time togetherā¼ļø
Jul 17, 2026 1:30 PM
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Today, I went to Shinjuku to look for a keychain that my mother wanted. Unfortunately, it was sold out, but I ended up buying a lot of stickers instead. š After that, I went back to school to attend my English class about prophecy, and then I headed to my part-time job.
The restaurant was extremely busy, and customers kept coming in until about ten minutes before closing time. Because of that, I finished work about thirty minutes later than usual. I was really tired by the end of the day, but Iām excited because Iām going to spend time with my friend tomorrow. I hope we have a great time together!
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, detailed, and very natural. You are able to describe a long day with different events while keeping the text organised and easy to follow. Your use of past tense, connectors, and expressions of emotion is very strong. Only minor punctuation and style adjustments were needed. Excellent work, keep it up! š
Jul 17, 2026 3:08 PM
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Yuna
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