I didn't have a part-time job today. After lunch, I had a meal with my girlfriend and her older sister. We went to a Korean fried chicken restaurant in Yokohama, and the food there was really deliciou

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I didn't have a part-time job today. After lunch, I had a meal with my girlfriend and her older sister. We went to a Korean fried chicken restaurant in Yokohama, and the food there was really delicious. After that, I'm planning to go to a local public bathhouse with some friends. I'm feeling better now, so I’m good.

Jul 18, 2026 9:13 AM

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I didn’t have my part-time job today. After lunch, I had a meal with my girlfriend and her older sister. We went to a Korean fried chicken restaurant in Yokohama, and the food there was really delicious. After that, I planned to go to a local public bathhouse with some friends. I’m feeling much better now, so I’m doing well.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, clear, and well organised. You describe your day naturally and use a good variety of vocabulary. The only real issue was maintaining a consistent tense throughout the text. Once that is corrected, your writing sounds very natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

Jul 18, 2026 12:37 PM

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