I had sushi for lunch in Yokohama today. After that, I came to the aquarium in Enoshima. I saw the penguin show, the dolphin show, and all kinds of fish, including sharks. After the aquarium, I had ra

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I had sushi for lunch in Yokohama today. After that, I came to the aquarium in Enoshima. I saw the penguin show, the dolphin show, and all kinds of fish, including sharks. After the aquarium, I had ramen for dinner in Kikuna. I’ll be studying tomorrow because I have a test for my French and culture class.

Jul 19, 2026 7:20 AM

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I had sushi for lunch in Yokohama today. After that, I went to the aquarium in Enoshima. I watched the penguin show, the dolphin show, and saw all kinds of fish, including sharks. After visiting the aquarium, I had ramen for dinner in Kikuna. I’ll be studying tomorrow because I have a French and Culture test.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, well organised, and easy to follow. You describe the events of your day naturally and use a good range of vocabulary. Only a few small collocation and verb-choice adjustments were needed to make your English sound even more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

Jul 19, 2026 9:20 AM

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