Please help me correct this. The illusion of being busy isn’t the same as being productive. We need to look beyond the superficial work. It only devalues our efficiency and effort. What matters is

Search from various English teachers...

七七77

Please help me correct this. The illusion of being busy isn’t the same as being productive. We need to look beyond the superficial work. It only devalues our efficiency and effort. What matters is not how you show to others, but how you show to yourself.

Jul 28, 2026 2:47 PM

Corrections · 1

Please help me correct this. The illusion of being busy is not the same as being productive. We need to look beyond superficial work. It only reduces our efficiency and wastes our effort. What matters is not how you present yourself to others, but how you show up for yourself.

Level: C1. This is a thoughtful and motivational piece of writing. You express your message clearly, and the contrast between appearance and genuine productivity is effective. The corrections mainly improve the idiomatic use of English rather than the grammar. Excellent work! 😊

Jul 28, 2026 8:03 PM

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!