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It was my first day working at the regional hospital in the emergency room. Everything was going well in the beginnig, and I was thinking ¨oh, I'm getting off to a flying start¨, well that little thought was a mistake. Suddenly a patient came in to the emergency room running an yelling that she couldn't stand the cooties, I got closer and effectly she had something on her head but they weren't cooties. It turned out to be worms. Quickly I started to attent her, however she wasn't the only patient there, so I left her in an apart room while I attended other patients. Later on I headed up to the apart room and I didn't see anybody, so I asked the nurse for that patient and she looked at me like if I had a scre loose... no one had seen her getting out. She was very smart leaking out. Later I would learn that doing that is very common amoung the patients.
Dec 30, 2024 9:22 PM
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It was my first day working at the regional hospital in the emergency room.
Everything was going well in the beginning and I was thinking ¨oh, I'm getting
off to a flying start.¨ Well, that little thought was a mistake. Suddenly a
patient came in to the emergency room, running and yelling that she couldn't stand
the cooties. I got closer and effectly she had something on her head but they
weren't cooties. It turned out to be worms. Quickly I started to attend to her,
however she wasn't the only patient there, so I left her in a different room while
I attended other patients. Later on, I headed up to the different room (could be name of the room) and I didn't
see anybody, so I asked the nurse for that patient and she looked at me like if
I had a screw loose... no one had seen her getting out. She was very smart
Sneaking out. Later I would learn that doing that is very common among the
patients.
Some simple errors but it's very good, you understand punctuation quite well :):)
December 30, 2024
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