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In Japan, the way that people celebrate their birthdays differs depends on the person. Families with children usually have a birthday party to celebrate children’s birthday, have special dinner and a birthday cake. Parents give a present to their children during the party.That’s why many children are looking forward to their birthday. As for middle aged people, some people receive a birthday present from their family or friends.However, some people don’t do anything for their birthday. Instead, they spend the day as usual. As for the elderly, when they become 60, 70, 77, 80,88,90,99 and 100 years old, we celebrate their longevity on a large scale. For their 60th birthday,which is called “Kanreki” in Japanese, whole family enjoys a meal together.A traditional Japanese red color cardigan used to be given to them to wish their longevity, but it has been changing. Nowadays, various things or goods are chosen as presents.
May 15, 2022 1:30 PM
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In Japan, the way that people celebrate their birthdays differs depending on the person. Families with children usually have a birthday party to celebrate their children’s birthdays, have special dinner and a birthday cake. Parents give a present to their children during the party.That’s why many children look forward to their birthdays. As for middle aged people, some people receive a birthday present from their family or friends.However, some people don’t do anything for their birthday. Instead, they spend the day as usual. As for the elderly, when they become 60, 70, 77, 80,88,90,99 and 100 years old, we celebrate their longevity on a large scale. For their 60th birthday,which is called “Kanreki” in Japanese, the whole family enjoys a meal together.A traditional Japanese red color cardigan used to be given to them to wish their longevity, but it has been changing. Nowadays, various things or goods are chosen as presents.
May 15, 2022
In Japan, the way that people celebrate their birthdays differs depending on the person. Families with children usually have a birthday party with a special dinner and a birthday cake to celebrate. Parents give a present to their children during the party. That’s why many children are looking forward to their birthdays. As for middle-aged people, some people receive a birthday present from their family or friends. However, some people don’t do anything for their birthdays. Instead, they spend the day as usual. As for the elderly, when they become 60, 70, 77, 80, 88, 90, 99 and 100 years old, we celebrate their longevity on a large scale. For their 60th birthday, which is called “Kanreki” in Japanese, the whole family enjoys a meal together. A traditional Japanese red color cardigan used to be given to them to wish for their longevity, but the custom has been changing. Nowadays, various things are chosen as presents.
Very clearly written. 😊 "Families with children usually have a birthday party to celebrate children’s birthday" >> You already said "birthday party", so you don't need to explain that they are celebrating a child's birthday. "A traditional Japanese red color cardigan" >> Are both the cardigan and the red color traditional and Japanese? (A traditional Japanese color)?
May 15, 2022
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