1. “Many new problems appears” → “many new problems appear” • “Problems” is plural, so the correct verb is “appear,” not “appears.” 2. “It takes us a lot time to find the best way for children’s growth” → “Finding the best way to support children’s growth has become challenging” • “It takes us a lot of time” is awkward in this context. • “Support children’s growth” is more natural than “the best way for children’s growth.” 3. “Running in the sushine” → “Running in the sunshine” • Fixed the typo: “sushine” → “sunshine.” 4. “But everything changes after more and more electronic devices came into our daily lives” → “But everything changed when electronic devices became a major part of our daily lives” • “Changes” should be past tense (“changed”) to match “came.” • “Came into our daily lives” is slightly awkward; “became a major part of our daily lives” sounds smoother. 5. “Children have a lot of E-learning courses online insteads of going out for fun” → “Now, children spend a lot of time on e-learning courses instead of going outside for fun” • “Insteads” is incorrect; it should be “instead.” • “Have a lot of e-learning courses” → “spend a lot of time on e-learning courses” sounds more natural. 6. “The percentage of children who have psychological problem increases really fast” → “The percentage of children experiencing psychological problems is increasing rapidly” • “Psychological problem” should be plural (“psychological problems”). • “Increases really fast” → “is increasing rapidly” is more natural and formal. 7. “The memory of sunshine and laugh just belong to adults” → “The memories of sunshine and laughter now belong mostly to adults” • “Memory” should be plural (“memories”). • “Laugh” is incorrect; the noun form is “laughter.” 8. “I hope that every adult can spend some time thinking about how much the electronic devices influence our children” → “I hope every adult takes some time to reflect on how much electronic devices influence our childre