Today I watched a soccer match between Ukraine and Wales. The winner of this match will qualify for the World Cup. The match was won by Wales. That match was very interesting！But it took place in the middle of the night Japan time, so I was very sleepy now. lol
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Tonight I watched the soccer match between Ukraine and Wales. The winner of this match will qualify for the World Cup. The match was won by Wales. The match was very interesting, but took place in the middle of the night Japan time.So I
was very sleepy now. lol
Outstanding job!!!! I watched that game too it was sad to see Ukraine loose especially by their own goal.
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Tonight I watched a soccer match between Ukraine and Wales. The winner of this match will qualify for the World Cup. The match was won by Wales. The match was very interesting, but took place in the middle of the night (Japan time). I am very sleepy now, lol.
Also, have included an example of how I would spice things up below :)
Tonight I watched a soccer match between Ukraine and Wales. The winner of the match (spoiler alert: Wales) qualifies for World Cup. It was an incredibly interesting match to watch. Unfortunately, here in Japan the match took place in the middle of the night, so I am very sleepy now lol!
Yuma-san, you're English writing is great. I would advise trying to use 'big' words and modifiers. Ganbaru yo!~
For example:
A) fun --> entertaining, exciting
B) big --> large, humongous
1) He was very fast --> He was unbelievably fast
2) The show was boring --> The show was extremely boring
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Last night I watched a soccer match between Ukraine and Wales. The winner of this match would have qualified for the World Cup. The match was won by Wales. It was very interesting, but it took place in the middle of the night Japanese time, so I am very sleepy now. lol
Yuma well written. It appears to me that you wrote this at 1.21 pm Japanese time on 6 June. I therefore have written this in the past tense. Hope you enjoyed the game. Please check out my profile. I have over five years teaching experience both in the classroom and online.
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