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Community Tutor昨天我在家做了红薯泥点心。原料是红薯,黄油,牛奶,糖,一点点盐。制作过程很少,做得非常简单!首先把煮好的红薯碾碎成红薯泥,然后加入其他的东西,搅拌得均均匀匀,用手做成小小的红薯形状,再把它们烤一下。如果在开始烤之前,在点心的表面抹上蛋黄的话,就会发出光泽,看起来会更好吃。昨天我怎么忘了买鸡蛋…😂可是没有鸡蛋也没关系。我即使吃没有使用鸡蛋的,也非常好吃!
Oct 17, 2025 12:13 AM
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昨天我在家做了红薯泥点心。原料是红薯,黄油,牛奶,糖,一点点盐。制作过程很短,步骤非常简单!首先把煮好的红薯碾碎成红薯泥,然后加入其他的东西,搅拌得均均匀匀,用手做成小小的红薯形状,再把它们烤一下。如果在开始烤之前,在点心的表面抹上蛋黄的话,就会很有光泽,看起来会更好吃。昨天我怎么忘了买鸡蛋…😂可是没有鸡蛋也没关系,即使没有添加鸡蛋的也非常好吃!
Your writing is already near perfect😊 Just need to correct a few words that sounds unnatural.
Oct 18, 2025 7:34 AM
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Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), English, French, Japanese
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Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), English
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