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Please help me correct. Some people say:"Marriage is the tomb of love, love is the shackle of freedom." Do you agree? In fact, what can lead to a happy marriage? I don't agree the view that marriage is the tomb of love; love is the shackle of freedom. Some people might agree the view. They think marriage is problem that doesn't have solution. Actually, on my view, the view is passive. The fact that a couple's marriage relationship takes effect doesn't mean their love beginning to fade.On the contrary, the generation of marriage relationships provide legal protection for their love and prevent love from breaking up. On marriage, love will fade away for losing communication and consideration of each other. If two people in love maintain mutual trust and respect each other's freedom and personal space in their relationship, love will not become a shackle of freedom. The happy marriage relationship is based on promise, belief, respect, faith, support, toleration and growing together. Conflict breaking out, communication with each other makes it fade.Two people do housework together, providing comfortable surroundings for each other. That two people can find the same habits and have common topic promote emotion. What's more, we should maintain specificity and loyalty towards each other, avoiding infidelity and deception. All things considered,marriage is not the tomb of love.If two people manage their marriage, they could have the happy marriage.
Apr 23, 2023 2:30 AM
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Please help me correct. Some people say:"Marriage is the tomb of love, love is the shackle of freedom." Do you agree? In fact, what can lead to a happy marriage? I don't agree with the view that marriage is the tomb of love; love is the shackle of freedom, although others might agree with that. They think marriage is a problem that doesn't have a solution. Actually, in my opinion, that view is passive. The fact that a couple's marriage takes effect doesn't mean their love begins to fade.On the contrary, generations of marriages provide legal protection for their love and prevent love from breaking up. The marriage between two people might be affected if their love fades for losing communication and consideration of each other. If two people in love maintain mutual trust and respect each other's freedom and personal space in their relationship, love will not become a shackle of freedom. A happy marriage is based on promise, belief, respect, faith, support, toleration and growing together. Conflict breaking out, poor communication with each other makes it fade. However, two people doing things together, and working towards common goals, provide comfortable surroundings for each other. Those two people can find the similar interests and common topics to talk about. What's more, it's important to maintain loyalty towards each other, avoid infidelity and deception. All things considered, marriage is not the tomb of love. If two people maintain a good relationship, they can have a happy and healthy marriage.
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April 23, 2023
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