Adele Mori
Hello, my average day starts early because I do yoga exercise and run in the morning. After that I prepare a big breakfast with my favourite food like yogurt, fruit, cereal and chocolate and I read some page of a book. I start work at 9.00 a.m. and I finish at 6 p.m. Normaly I spend a lot of time sitting in front of my computer, so when I finish I like walk. During the week-end I don’t work, so I spend my spare time with my favourite Hobbies like drawing, reading, trekking and preparing cakes!
Sep 17, 2020 5:26 PM
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Hello, my average day starts early because I do yoga exercise and run in the morning. After that I prepare a big breakfast with my favourite food like yogurt, fruit, cereal and chocolate and I read some page of a book. I start work at 9.00 a.m. and I finish at 6 p.m. Normaly I spend a lot of time sitting in front of my computer, so when I finish I like walk. During the week-end I don’t work, so I spend my spare time with my favourite Hobbies like drawing, reading, trekking and preparing cakes!
Well written. Everything is totally understandable and concise: a big success. Use 'to walk' instead of just 'walk'. You could also instead say 'to go for a walk'. That is commonly said. 'Normally' (spelling). we usually type 'weekend' without the dash.
September 17, 2020
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