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Can you tell me if这个作文有问题吗?☺️ 当你的生活没有梦想时,你将过着不愉快和毫无意义的生活。 每个人都应该有一个他努力实现的梦想。 在追求梦想的道路上,有机会就要抓紧,不要思考太多,必须勇于抓住机会,毫不犹豫。 但是,如果你错过了一个机会,不要太沮丧,不要让自己感到很遗憾。不要让自己感到很遗憾,错过了一个机会并不会造成世界末日。 只要我们继续努力,生活总会再次打开机会之门,只要保持乐观,不怕失败。
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Jun 4, 2022 7:42 PM
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第一段将最后三个字的生活去掉,理由:前后矛盾,就是重复了的意思
November 24, 2022
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Arabic, Chinese (Mandarin), English
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Chinese (Mandarin)
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