I went to the dentist today. After that, I went to my part-time job. I’m looking forward to summer break starting soon. During summer break, I’m going to Hokkaido, see a Vaundy concert, and visit Tott

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I went to the dentist today. After that, I went to my part-time job. I’m looking forward to summer break starting soon. During summer break, I’m going to Hokkaido, see a Vaundy concert, and visit Tottori. I have a lot planned, and I’m really excited. The only exams left are psychology and biology. Summer break is just around the corner, so I’m going to do my best.

Jul 21, 2026 1:49 PM

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I went to the dentist today. After that, I went to my part-time job. I’m looking forward to summer break starting soon. During the summer break, I’m going to Hokkaido, see a Vaundy concert, and visit Tottori. I have a lot planned, and I’m really excited. The only exams I have left are psychology and biology. Summer break is just around the corner, so I’m going to do my best.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, well organised, and very natural. You clearly describe your day and your plans, and your grammar is consistently accurate. Only a couple of small stylistic improvements were needed to make the English sound even more idiomatic. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

Jul 21, 2026 2:19 PM

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