Advertisements are absolutely important in our daily life, because it leads us to services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on billboards, on TV , as well as in podcas

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Riman

Advertisements are absolutely important in our daily life, because it leads us to services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on billboards, on TV , as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements- especially those on social media- have helped me a lot to find good things I want to buy.

Oct 23, 2023 6:57 PM

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Advertisements are absolutely vital in our daily lives, because they make us aware of services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on billboards, on TV , as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements- especially those on social media- have helped me a lot to find good things I want to buy.

'Absolutely' does not collocate (combine) well with 'important'. You could however have used 'extremely important' or 'really important'. Also you more commonly find the association of 'goods and services' rather than the other way around. If you are looking to raise the level of your English somewhat, you could also think about how you could replace 'a lot' and 'good', with more interesting expressions. These are just suggestions - not 'corrections'.🙂

October 23, 2023

Advertisements are absolutely important in our daily lives because they lead us to services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on billboards, on TV, as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements especially those on social media - have helped me a lot to find good things I want to buy.

October 23, 2023

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