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I had fun with my friend today. We ate lunch together in a Yunnan style restaurant which was good. Then I accompanied her to a customer-tailored closet company to see the design and layout . She is decorating her condo and the company made her a custom solution, which includes a wardrobe, a bed and mat, a shoe closet, two studies, a desk, overall kitchen cabinets (did I make it correct?). I gave her some advice when we were discussing with the designer and representative. She confirmed the design in the end and paid deposit. There was a big discount for her because she knows the entrepreneur of the company, who used to be a professor at the same university where my friend graduated. The former professor majored in automation and developed a very good software for closet custom. However, no companies saw the value of the software and would like to buy it. Therefore, he started the business by himself using the software he developed. His company is striving now. A good example for the saying: when a window closes, a door opens, isn’t it?
Jun 19, 2021 5:13 PM
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I had fun with my friend today. We ate lunch together in a Yunnan style
restaurant which was good. Then I accompanied her to a customer-tailored closet
company to see the design and layout of the closet she was wanting. She is decorating her condo and the
company made her a custom solution, which includes a wardrobe, a bed and mat, a
shoe closet, two studies, a desk, overall kitchen cabinets (did I make it
correct? Maybe you mean “wall cabinets” i.e. cabinets attached to the wall rather than being on the floor). I gave her some advice when we were discussing things with the designer and the
representative. She confirmed she was happy with the design in the end and paid a/the deposit. There was
a big discount for her (She got a big discount) because she knows the entrepreneur of the company (she knows the company director), who
used to be a professor at the university where my friend graduated. This professor majored in automation and developed very good software for designing
closets. However, no companies saw the value of the software and so he was unable to sell his idea to them. Therefore, he started the business by himself using the software
he had developed. His company is thriving now. A good example for the saying: when a
window closes, a door opens, isn’t it?
June 19, 2021
I had fun with my friend today. We ate lunch together in a Yunnan style restaurant which was good. Then I accompanied her to a customer-tailored closet company to see the designs and layouts . She is decorating her condo and the company made her a custom solution, which includes a wardrobe, a bed and mat, a shoe closet, two studies, a desk, overall kitchen cabinets (did I make it correct?). I gave her some advice when we were discussing with the designer and representative. She confirmed the design in the end and paid a deposit. There was a big discount for her because she knows the entrepreneur of the company, who used to be a professor at the same university where my friend graduated. The former professor majored in automation and developed a very good software for custom closets. However, no companies saw the value of the software and would like to buy it. Therefore, he started the business by himself using the software he developed. His company is striving now. A good example for the saying: when a window closes, a door opens, isn’t it?
well done, great text! complex subject but you did a good job communicating all of that.
June 19, 2021
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Jessie💞Isabella
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English
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