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我的爱好。<o:p></o:p>
每个人有自己的爱好，我也有。 我的爱好是游泳。 从小我跟我爸爸一起去游泳地操练。我经常去游泳池。游泳的时候我一边休息，一边锻炼身体。 长大以后我还喜欢游泳。<o:p></o:p>
Apr 16, 2019 9:24 AM
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April 16, 2019
每个人（may add 都to make it fluent）有自己的爱好，我也有。 我的爱好是游泳。 从小我跟我爸爸一起去游泳地(maybe 游泳池)操练（maybe 锻炼 is more appropriate）。我经常去游泳池。游泳的时候我一边休息，一边锻炼身体。 长大以后我还（maybe 依然 is more appropriate ）喜欢游泳。
This passage of yours is coherent，The usage of some synonyms needs to be familiarized
^_^
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April 16, 2019
yana
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Russian
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin)
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