Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt an absolute happiness. I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your precious life.

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Jun 10, 2023 2:48 PM

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Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt an absolute happiness. I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your precious life.

This is grammatically correct, as I would expect from someone with such a high English level! It's more common to say "an absolute joy" or "absolute happiness" than "an absolute happiness" - it's not wrong, just a bit surprising 😊 Similarly, "shine a light on" is a somewhat surprising phrase to use here, since I usually think of it as "reveal", and I think you're trying to say something more like "focus on"? Either way, there's no real problems. If I heard a model say this in a soap commercial, I would accept it without thinking twice 😄

June 11, 2023

Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt pure happiness. I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your precious life.

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June 11, 2023

Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt a source of absolute happiness. I'm hoping that a light will shine on your precious life.

June 11, 2023

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