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my favorite sport: swimming I am a very sportive guy, and you can always find me in basket ball gyms, at tennis courts or fitness centers. However, my favorite sport is swimming. And there are a couple of reasons to name. To begin with, swimming is a high-efficient cardio to strengthen muscle and reduce fat simultaneously. With a strong and healthy stature I feel confident every day. Moreover, I love the feeling while touching water. I’m sure each of my nerve cells is enjoying relax when my body immerges in the water. Someone told me that a person is re-experiencing the sensation before birth when s/he is swimming. So I guess maybe I used to be a good swimmer before birth.
Aug 5, 2011 10:06 PM
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my favorite sport: swimming Swimming - My Favourite Sport.

I am a very sportive guy, who is very much into sports 1 and you can always find me in on the basket ball  gyms, at or the tennis court;  and in the gym or some other fitness centers. However, my favorite sport is swimming. And 2There are a couple of reasons:  to name. To begin with, swimming is a high-efficient cardio exercise to strengthen muscles and to reduce fat simultaneously. With In having a strong and healthy stature physique I feel confident everyday. Moreover, I love the feeling while touching of water coursing through me as I swim. I’m am sure that each of my nerve every cell within me cells is enjoying relax having a wonderful time as when my body immerges in submerges into the water. Someone told me that a person is we are re-experiencing the sensation before birth when s/he is swimming. just as we were born.  So I guess maybe I used to be was a good swimmer before I came to this world. 3 birth.

1.  Or you can say, "I am a very active guy".

2.  Don't begin a sentence with "and", "or" or "but".  These are conjunctions used to connect sentences in the middle.  Use, "However", "though", "since" if you need to begin a sentence with one.

3.  Nothing wrong but using the same word so close makes your writing sound dull.  So I uses a different way to express the same thing.

August 8, 2011
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