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Hyesung Kim
Shopping in an outlet of America
Last Sunday, I visited Tanger outlet. In order to buy my husband's cloths. He hates to go shopping. So when I ask him to go shopping together to buy his cloths, He always answers "I can't be bothered to go shopping.". But since a lot of his cloths were worn out, he obediently followed my suggestion. Actually when I was living in Korea, I never bought cloths in Rarph lauren or Tommy hilfiger. Because These brand's products are really expensive in Korea. I was surprised to buy these cloths in outlet of America. I bought many cloths with almost 80% discounted price. Although it is not a this season's product, the quality is same with normal priced products. At this time, my husband bought 3 shirts and 1 pants, I bought 1 cardigan and 1 sweatshirt in Rarph lauren and Tommy hifiger.
Thank you for your effort to read my writing and correct it!
Sep 26, 2019 9:25 PM
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Hi Hyesung Kim!
Shopping at an American outlet
Last Sunday, I went to the Tanger outlets to buy my clothes for my husband. He hates to go shopping. When I ask him to go shopping together to buy his clothes, He always answers with "I can't be bothered to go shopping.". But since a lot of his clothes were worn out, he obediently took my suggestion.
When I was living in Korea, I never bought clothes at Ralph Lauren or Tommy Hilfiger because their products are really expensive there. I was surprised to buy these clothes in an American outlet. I bought many clothes at nearly an 80% discount. Although they are not this season's products, the quality is the same as normal priced products. On this trip, my husband bought 3 shirts and 1 pair of pants, and I bought 1 cardigan and 1 sweatshirt in Ralph Lauren and Tommy Hilfiger.
Thank you for your effort to read my writing and correct it!
Great job writing this! It sounds like you had a successful shopping trip. Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
Thank you!
Savannah
September 26, 2019
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Hyesung Kim
Language Skills
English, Korean, Spanish
Learning Language
English
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