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Where do you want to go in Japan? Where do you want to go in Japan? I've been to Tokyo,Yokohama,Osaka,Kyoto. I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year. The exhibition of the Alice in Wonderland was held there. There were many works. I really enjoyed it. I went to Osaka and Kyoto 2 years ago. I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki. My friend lived in Gifu,and we met in Kyoto. We ate Matcha parfait in Gion. I had a great time. I've never been to Sendai,Iwant to go there. How about you?
Feb 18, 2020 8:59 AM
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Where do you want to go in Japan?

Where do you want to go in Japan?

I've been to Tokyo, Yokohama, Osaka and Kyoto.

I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year.
The exhibition of <s>the</s> Alice in Wonderland was held there.
There were many works.
I really enjoyed it.

I went to Osaka and Kyoto two years ago.
I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki.
My friend lived in Gifu and we met in Kyoto.
We ate Matcha Parfait in Gion.
I had a great time.

I've never been to Sendai, I want to go there.

How about you?

Note: Well written, fluid and grammatically sound. I would only advise that you watch your spacing between words.
February 18, 2020
1
Where do you want to go in Japan?

Where do you want to go in Japan?

I've been to Tokyo, Yokohama, Osaka, Kyoto. (watch out for spaces after a comma)

I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year.
The exhibition of <s>the</s> Alice in Wonderland was held there.
There were many <s>works</s> exhibits.
I really enjoyed it.

I went to Osaka and Kyoto 2 years ago.
I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki.
My friend lived (the past tense suggests, that he does not live there anymore) in Gifu, and we met in Kyoto.
We ate Matcha parfait in Gion.
I had a great time.

I've never been to Sendai, I want to go there.

How about you?
February 18, 2020
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Elena
Language Skills
English, Italian, Japanese
Learning Language
English, Italian
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