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Unexpected things
After a long, tiring workday, I took a bus as usual. I expected a happy bus ride. However, the ride wasn't pleasant at all.
The unhappy bus ride started by giving a seat to others. After getting on the bus, I was lucky to find a seat. As I was ready to rest my eyes, an old man stumblingly got on the bus. I was worry about him for he might fall over, he looked gaunt, diminutive and all his hair was white. Therefore, I immediately stood up and went forward to him, telling him that he could have a seat.
Unexpectedly, there were two young girls were chatting, one stood, one seat next to me, the former took my seat rapidly while I just left. Her in consideration literally got on my nerves, because I heard these two girls were talking about the old man before.
Irritated, I told the girl who sat on my seat"please, stand up, this seat is prepared for the elder" Might she notice the unpleasant on my face. She stood up right away. When the old man finally got seat, he told me "thank you, young man. "
Apr 19, 2020 6:52 AM
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Unexpected things
After a long, tiring workday, I took <s>a </s> the bus as usual. I expected a happy bus ride. However, the ride wasn't pleasant at all.
The unhappy bus ride started <s>by</s> off with me giving up my <s>a</s> seat <s>to others</s>. After getting on the bus, I was lucky to find a seat. As I was ready to rest my eyes, an old man <s>stumblingly</s> stumbled while <s>got</s> getting on the bus. I was worried <s>worry</s> <s>about him for</s> that he might fall over. He looked gaunt, diminutive and all of his hair was white (gray is commonly used). Therefore, I immediately stood up and went <s>forward </s>to him, telling him that he could have <s>a</s> my seat.
<s>Unexpectedly</s> Meanwhile, there were two young girls who were chatting. One was standing <s>stood</s> and one sat <s>seat</s> next to me. The former took my seat <s>rapidly</s> <s>while</s> just as I just left. Her inconsideration literally got on my nerves because I had just heard these two girls talking about the old man.
Irritated, I told the girl who sat on my seat to stand up. "This seat is <s>prepared </s>for the elder." <s>Might S</s>he noticed the <s>unpleasant</s> disapproval on my face. She stood up right away. When the old man finally got tot the seat, he told me: "Thank you, young man. "
April 19, 2020
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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