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Informal Letter (B2 exam) Hi! Could you correct this exercise? Thanks :) Dear Marisa, Many thanks for your message, I’m glad to hear from you again. The first thing I want to say is how friendship is so important in my life. Since when I was a child I’ve always played into the pubblic garden near my home. Here I’ve had the opportunity to knew many children like me and I grew up with our companies. Many of them are still my friends. I think that friendship is an important aspect of our life because if there were the necessity we could help each other in diffucult times other than we could share good times togheter. I’ve a little crew and I considered all of them my best friends. We know each other for more than ten years. We have all different personalities but in my opinion this charatheristic is own strenght. I moved to Firenze four months ago and so, It’s more difficult to see each other, but we always tell each other everything. We are going to booking our holiday in Turkey for the next summer. Please tell me about your friends in the next letter. Write soon! Best wishes, Giulia

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Informal Letter (B2 exam)

Hi! Could you correct this exercise? Thanks :)

Dear Marisa,
Many thanks (Not wrong, but doesn't sound natural) Thanks so much for your message, I’m glad to hear from you again.

The first thing I want to say is how friendship is so important in my life.
Since When I was a child I’ve always played I used to always play into the public garden near my house. Here, I’ve had the opportunity to knew meet many children like me and I grew up with our companies we grew up together. Many of them are still my friends. I think that friendship is an important aspect of our life because if there were the necessity a need we could help each other in difficult times. other than We could also share good times together.

I’ve I have (Or: I've got) a little crew and I considered all of them my best friends. We have (or: we've) know each other for more than ten years. We have all have different personalities but in my opinion this these different characteristics is are our own strengths.

I moved to Firenze four months ago and so, it’s more difficult to see each other, but we always tell each other everything. We are going to booking our next Summer holiday vacation in Turkey for the next summer.
Please tell me about your friends in the next letter. Write soon!
Best wishes,
Giulia

Great job on this writing practice Giulsi! Sounds like you have a great group of friends.
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Dear Marisa,
I’m glad to hear from you again.
Friendship is so important in my life.
When I was a child, I’ve always played at the public garden near my home. I’ve had the opportunity to know many children and I grew up with them. Many of them are still my friends. I think that friendship is an important aspect of our life because if we could help each other in difficult times, then we would share good times together.
I’ve a little crew and I consider all of them my best friends. We have known each other for more than ten years. We all have different personalities but we share a similar characteristic in strength.
I moved to Firenze four months ago so it's difficult to be in contact, but we always tell each other everything. We are going to book our holiday the next summer at Turkey.
Please tell me about your friends.
Best wishes,
Giulia
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Informal Letter (B2 exam)

Hi! Could you correct this exercise? Thanks :)

Dear Marisa,
Many thanks for your message, I’m glad to hear from you again.
The first thing I want to say is how friendship is so important in my life.
Since when I was a child I’ve always played into the pubblic garden near my home. ThHere I’ve had the opportunity to get to kneow many children like me and I grew up with our companies. Many of them are still my friends. I think that friendship is an important aspect of our life because if there were ever the necessity need, we cwould help each other in diffuicult times other than we could share good times togheter.
I’ve a little crew and that I considered all of them my best friends. We've know each other for more than ten years. We all have all different personalities, but in my opinion this charatheristic is own strenght.
I moved to Firenze Florence four months ago and so, It’s more difficult to see each other, but we always tell each other everything. We are going to be booking our holiday in Turkey for the next summer.
Please tell me about your friends in the your next letter. Write soon!
Best wishes,
Giulia

Hi Giula,
The sections shaded in blue were difficult to understand, so I didn't make suggestions for them. Otherwise, great job!

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