Please help me to check my essay Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ，which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although

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Please help me to check my essay Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ，which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't try Quora because of vpn restrictions. In the future I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language right? Hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please

Jun 22, 2020 5:57 AM

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Please help me <s>to check </s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">revise</s> my essay

Hello this is my first time to use using this app<s>, </s><s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">.</s>I found this app through <s>in </s>ZhiHu ，which is a Chinese website that focuses <s>focus</s> on solving various problems.

ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't <s>try</s> tried Quora because of VPN restrictions.

In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends.

It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language, right?

I h<s>H</s>ope someone warm-hearted <s>look at me ! Please </s>will take a look at what I've written. Thank you

June 22, 2020

Please help me to check my essay

Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ，which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s>. ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't tried Quora because of VPN restrictions. In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It really <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> is the perfect app for people/those who want to learn a new language, right? I hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please

Please help correct my essay.

Hello! This is my first time using iTalki. I found this app through ZhiHu, which is a Chinese website focused on solving various problems. ZhiHu is the Chinese equivalent to Quora, though I haven't tried Quora due to online censorship. In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make new friends. It is a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language, right? I hope someone warm-hearted/benevolent will verify my essay.

Thank you.

Please, qing3? Thank you, xie xie

Be sure to use periods when you complete a thought. Structured sentences are incredibly important to being understood. This is a good start. At the end, when you say look at me, you're probably translating a Chinese idiom into English. Idioms cannot be translated between languages - but these are advanced topics so don't worry too much about them yet. The most important thing is when to use a period . or a comma , to convey your thoughts.

June 22, 2020

In March 2018, the use of unapproved VPN services was banned in China, as they can be used by to circumvent the Great Firewall.

June 7, 2021

Please help me to check my essay

Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ，which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't try Quora because of vpn restrictions. In the future I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language right? Hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please

June 22, 2020

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