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Vivian
The digital age Nowdays,all kinds of digital products are widely used all around the world.Such as digital camera,digital television,digital dictionary and so on.I can say that now is a digital age. It brights both good and bad influence by using these digital goods.To be frank,on the one hand,it's getting more convenient for us to use these digital products and with the development of economy,these products are becoming more and more smart and functioning.For example,we can learn more knowledge which out of our class books by using the study mechanism;We can receive the newest news from all around the world at the first time. However ,as we all know ,every coin has its two sides.It also exists disadvantages by using those tools.In my opinion,people may become lazy after they enjoyed the advantages from these digital goods.What's worse,some students may rely on the studying mechanism so that they will decline the times of using their mind and heart on study. All in all,it needs us to control ourselves well to use the digital products. By the way,this composition is my homework,so I hope that will be someone to help me to modify it as soon as possible.
Oct 21, 2011 6:57 AM
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The digital age

Nowdays,all kinds of digital products are widely used all around the world.Such as digital camera,digital television,digital dictionary and so on.I can say that now is a digital age.
It brights     brings both good and bad influence by using these digital goods.To be frank,on the one hand,it's getting more convenient for us to use these digital products and with the development of economy,these products are becoming more and more smart   smarter and functioning     powerful        For example,we can learn more knowledge which  is  out of our class books by using the study mechanism;We can receive the newest  latest news from all around the world at the first time. 
However ,as we all know ,every coin has its two sides.It also exists disadvantages by using those tools.In my opinion,people may become lazy after they enjoyed the advantages from these digital goods.What's worse,some students may rely on the studying mechanism so that they will decline the times  time  of using their mind and heart on study. 
All in all,it needs us to control ourselves well to use the digital products.
By the way,this composition is my homework,so I hope that will be someone to help me to modify it as soon as possible.

November 26, 2011
perhaps this is your digital thoughts .. isn't it ?
October 21, 2011
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