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About my native town I was born and growned up in Baku. I like it very much. I think that i cant leave it for a long time, because i have here my family&friends. I like its boulevard,coming here i become calmer after work. I like to regard Caspian Sea. Sometimes i paint the beauty of my city. It is very old and also modern city. My time is famous with its Maiden Tower, Icheri Sheher (Old city), Palace of Shirvanshahs and Etc. Day by day our country become more beautiful: new parks and buildings. That people who will read it maybe can say that i praise it,but is not true. Tourist who have seen it can agree with me. Im proud of my Baku.
Jul 28, 2012 6:56 AM
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About my native town

I was born and grew up in Baku. I like it very much. I think that I can't leave it for a long time, because I have here my family&friends. I like its boulevard,coming here I get relaxed after work. I like to sit in front of the Caspian Sea. Sometimes, I paint the beauty of my city. It is very old and also modern city. My city is famous with its Maiden Tower, Icheri Sheher (Old city), Palace of Shirvanshahs , ..etc . Day by day our country become more beautiful while new parks and buildings are constructed. The people who are reading this note may say that i praise ( overrate )  it , but it is not true. Tourists who have seen it can agree with me. Im proud of my Baku.

 

Note: Don't consider this a correction. I'm just a learner too. Regard it as an opinion.

I think more advanced users will help you with some sentences in your note which I think they don't express what you mean very well. For example, this sentence " It is very old and also modern city." I can get what you mean with this sentence very well. But I think there is some other sentence which will express what you mean better. But I don't have it either.

 

Good luck my friend.

July 29, 2012
awesome.............:) where are you...?
February 14, 2013
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