About my native town
I was born and grew up in Baku. I like it very much. I think that I can't leave it for a long time, because I have here my family&friends. I like its boulevard,coming here I get relaxed after work. I like to sit in front of the Caspian Sea. Sometimes, I paint the beauty of my city. It is very old and also modern city. My city is famous with its Maiden Tower, Icheri Sheher (Old city), Palace of Shirvanshahs , ..etc . Day by day our country become more beautiful while new parks and buildings are constructed. The people who are reading this note may say that i praise ( overrate ) it , but it is not true. Tourists who have seen it can agree with me. Im proud of my Baku.
Note: Don't consider this a correction. I'm just a learner too. Regard it as an opinion.
I think more advanced users will help you with some sentences in your note which I think they don't express what you mean very well. For example, this sentence " It is very old and also modern city." I can get what you mean with this sentence very well. But I think there is some other sentence which will express what you mean better. But I don't have it either.
Good luck my friend.


