delaram
A letter of application....needs correction Dear Mr Jarvis, I am writing to apply for the Modcaster University exam courses,advertised in the news paper of 13 August. I should very much like to take part in the courses for FCE. I am 20 years old and have just completed an intermediate degree in English at Hermes institute,Which I passed with Distinction.I have a query about your advertisement Could I have some details about your part time courses in English?could you give me the clearer impression of the times and days of that courses? I am studying architecture at Shariaty University of Tehran.I need English for my major and i would like to continue my education abroad therefore I need to have a degree n English .I would very much like to attend your courses for the Cambridge exam. I enclose my CV full details of my qualification and English experience.I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Delaram Gholamhosseini, enc.CV
Aug 24, 2012 3:20 PM
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Sorry! It didn't quite break it down into paragraphs! Sorry about that....
August 26, 2012
Dear Mr. Jarvis,  I am very interested in applying for the Modcaster University exam courses, as advertised in the news paper of 13 August. I would very much like to take part in the courses for FCE.  I am 20 years old, and have just completed an intermediate degree in English at Hermes institute, which I have passed with Distinction.  However, I have a query about your advertisement, and was hoping you could forward me some details about your part time courses in English, including the specific times and days of these programs. I am an Architecture student at Shariaty University of Tehran, and in order to continue my education abroad, I will require an English Degree. Therefore, I would very much like to attend your courses for the Cambridge exam.  I have enclosed my CV with complete details of my qualifications and English experience. I look forward to hearing from you.  Yours sincerely, Delaram Gholamhosseini,  enc.CV
August 26, 2012
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