A letter of application....needs correction
Dear Mr Jarvis,
I am writing to apply for the Modcaster University exam courses,advertised in the news paper of 13 August. I should very much like to take part in the courses for FCE.
I am 20 years old and have just completed an intermediate degree in English at Hermes institute,Which I passed with Distinction.I have a query about your advertisement Could I have some details about your part time courses in English?could you give me the clearer impression of the times and days of that courses?
I am studying architecture at Shariaty University of Tehran.I need English for my major and i would like to continue my education abroad therefore I need to have a degree n English .I would very much like to attend your courses for the Cambridge exam.
I enclose my CV full details of my qualification and English experience.I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Delaram Gholamhosseini,
enc.CV