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Scary things Today I have watched in youtube a scottish girl talking about her frightening experiences. She talked about a strange noise in the toilet, about things that hit her in the back of her head, about toilets flushing by themselves... I don't know if most of those things were made up or real, but I came up with a memory of something that happened to me a few years ago. I was still living at my mother's house; I was asleep in the middle of the night, in my old bed, when I wake up, stared just in front of me, and I saw a child sitting at the feet of my bed. Dressing a white suit, he was just staring at me. Just that, staring at me. He said nothing neither moved a single muscle, I was terrified and I wanted to shout loud, but the sound didn't come out my mouth. I don't have a clear memory of what happened next, and today I can't still say if I was really awake. The only thing I know it's that I felt like if it was really true. Was it?
Feb 19, 2013 12:51 PM
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Scary things

Today I have watched in youtube a Scottish girl on youtube talking about her frightening experiences. She talked told (I changed this so it doesn't sound too repetitive) about a strange noise in the toilet, about things that hit her in the back of her head, about toilets flushing by themselves... I don't know if most of those things were made up or real, but it made me remember I came up with a memory of something that happened to me a few years ago.

I was still living at my mother's house; I was asleep in the It was the middle of the night and I was asleep in my old bed, when I suddenly woke wake up, stared and just in front of me, and I saw was a child sitting at the foot feet of my bed. Dressing a white suit, He was just staring at me dressed in a white suit. Just that, staring at me. (this was just repetitive and doesn't add anything new to your story) He said nothing neither moved and didn't move a single muscle, I was terrified and I (redundant as "I" has already been mentioned) wanted to shout out loud but the no sound didn't come came out of my mouth. I don't have a clear memory of what happened next and even today I still can't still say if I was really awake. The only thing that I know it's is that I felt like if it was really true. Was it?

Well written!  Some grammatical changes required but nevertheless a good scary bedtime story!  Keep up the interesting stories!

February 19, 2013
Seriously, I will never wish to witness such a thing.
February 20, 2013
I think this thing sounds like a dream.
February 19, 2013
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