Let me introduce myself 1 My name is Jiabo,come from china,and live in the Shenzhen city which on south of china mainland. Shenzhen is a modern and faster development city. I working for an american

Jiabo

Let me introduce myself 1 My name is Jiabo,come from china,and live in the Shenzhen city which on south of china mainland. Shenzhen is a modern and faster development city. I working for an american company which design antenna for the mobile.My job is a mechanical engineer.

Apr 25, 2013 2:37 AM

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My name is Jiabo, I come from china, and I live in Shenzhen, which is in the south of mainland China.
It is a modern and quickly developing city.
I work for an American company which designs antennae for mobile devices. My job is a mechanical engineer.

May 16, 2013

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