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journey of today,chinese temple.
Today is the labor's day,so I dont have lessons .I went to the temple,which is near from my school.I went there with my best friend.We took the bus at 8 am,it was so convenient to go there.I saw a lot of Buddhas.They are so wonderful.I thought chinese culture is so long and fantastic.I had a good timetoday.Besides,I preyed it for my new friend Syed Ali. I took some pictures by my camera.If you guys want to see them,will be free to ask me for it.send one of them on.Behind me is the tower named LinXiao.It is vary tall .
May 1, 2013 10:11 AM
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Journey of today,Chinese temple.
Today is the labor day, so I don't have lessons. I went to the temple, which is near from my school. I went there with my best friend. We took the bus at 8 am. It was so convenient to go there. I saw a lot of Buddhas. They are so wonderful. I thought Chinese culture is so old and fantastic. I had a good time today. Besides, I prayed it for my new friend Syed Ali. I took some pictures with my camera. If you guys want to see them, feel free to ask me for them. Send one of them on. Behind me is the tower named LinXiao. It is vary tall.
[<em>Good work. Remember to put a space after all commas and periods, not before. Prey = 捕食, pray = 祈祷.]</em>
May 1, 2013
Oh,you are so beautiful, can I make friends with you?
May 1, 2013
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Andrea
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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