My Dreaming house My dreaming house which is a beautiful cottage is located in the forest, with a lot of colourful flowers around. The living room which is surround by kitchen, bedroom as well as wash

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My Dreaming house My dreaming house which is a beautiful cottage is located in the forest, with a lot of colourful flowers around. The living room which is surround by kitchen, bedroom as well as washroom is in the middle of the cottage. There is a study on the second floor and I can read books quietly and surf the Internet there. My cottage is quite special because it can fly away when it was in emergency, so we will be safe. With loving my dreaming cottage, I will consider more details to make it perfect.

May 4, 2013 1:59 PM

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My Dream House

My dream house which is a beautiful cottage that is located in the forest, with a lot of colourful flowers around it. The living room, which is surround by kitchen, bedroom as well as washroom, is in the middle of the cottage. There is a study on the second floor and I can read books quietly and surf the Internet there. My cottage is quite special, because it can fly away when it has an emergency, so we will be safe. While loving my dream cottage, I will consider more details to make it perfect.

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May 4, 2013

I hope you will have it.

June 7, 2013

REVISED VERSION: MY DREAM HOUSE

My dream house is a beautiful cottage in the forest with a lot of colorful flowers around. The living room is in the middle of the cottage and it is surrounded by the kitchen, the bedroom and the washroom. The study room is in the second floor. This is where I can read books and surf the Internet. My cottage is quite special because it can move to different places whenever I want to. This feature is especially useful if there is danger in the area. I love my dream cottage. I will add more details in the future to make it more perfect.

May 25, 2013