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The mother's day gift The second Sunday of May is the Mother's Day every year. So,the Mother's Day is like brithday. I hoped to give her a good gift. I didn't tell my mum that i would give her a gift. Because she doesn't like any gift. She always tells me not to waste money there. I was choosing a gift at supermall. I prepared a gloves and two tins of longan for my mother. I knew that these gifts were better than someone else's and they are my intention.
May 18, 2013 3:42 PM
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The mother's day gift

The second Sunday in May is Mother's Day, every year.
So, Mother's Day is like brithday.
I decided to give my mom a good gift.
I didn't tell her because she doesn't like gifts.
She always tells me not to waste money.
I chose a gift at the supermall.
I prepared a pair of gloves and two longan tins for my mother.
I knew that these gifts were better than someone else's and that was my intention.

May 20, 2013
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May 20, 2013
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