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Thunderstorm
Thunderstorm is common in summer. I'm at home alone tonight. A lightning was followed by a fearful clap of thunder. The thunder is so loudly. And it even startled me just now.
May 25, 2013 12:11 PM
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Thunderstorm
Thunderstorms are common in the summer.
I'm at home alone tonight.
Suddenly a flash of lightning introduces a fearful clap of thunder. The thunder is so loud it startled me.
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May 25, 2013
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ChelseaPan
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), Chinese (Other), English, French, Spanish
Learning Language
English, French, Spanish
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