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A brief conversation in English A: OH, how are you? Have you been right these years? B: Yes, I’m well. What about you? A: Me, too. Today is the day of our scheduled appointment. There must be many traveling experience at the time we apart. I have told you all my travel in letter. Now it’s your turn. What about your experience through your travel. B: Ok. Our team wins the first price in the National Speech Contest at the end of this term. In order to celebrate our victory, we went to Okinawa, the beautiful cherry blossom beaches and comfortable hot spring still echoed in my mind. A: It's such a good experience! Didn't spend with you, I'm sorry. Fortunately, we will together at the future time. B: I’m really looking forward to it.
Jun 19, 2013 3:30 PM
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A brief conversation in English

A: OH, how are you? Have you been all right these years?
B: Yes, I’m well. What about you?
A: Me, too. Today is the day of our scheduled appointment. There must be many traveling experiences in the time we were apart. I have told you all about my travels in the letter. Now it’s your turn. What about your experience with your travel.
B: Ok. Our team won the first prize in the National Speech Contest at the end of this term. In order to celebrate our victory, we went to Okinawa. The beautiful cherry blossom beaches and comfortable hot spring still echoed in my mind.
A: It's such a good experience! I'm sorry I didn't spend with you, I'm sorry. Fortunately, we will get together in the future.
B: I’m really looking forward to it.

 

<em>[Good work.  Some of your work was technically correct, but you just wouldn't hear it in normal spoken English.]</em>

June 19, 2013
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