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Enid
My ex-boyfriend Three years has passed by since we separated,but I still can not forget you.Reading your bolgs from time to time or listening to those songs which you sang to me at nihgt.Now, you are going to marry your new girlfriend happily and perfectly,which I cannot imagine.I think,maybe, this is the right time for me to move on,but I can‘t forget the day when you dumped me,because it was my birthday-the day after Valentines day.How could you treat me like this! You said we broke up because of the disagreement of your parents,and you would love me even we were apart.Aha,all bullshit!
Aug 27, 2013 4:57 PM
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My ex-boyfriend

Three years has <em>have</em> passed by since we separated, but I still can not forget you. Reading your bolgs <em>blogs</em> from time to time or listening to those songs which you sang to me at nihgt <em>night</em>. Now, you are (<em>happy and</em>) going to marry your new girlfriend happily and perfectly, which I cannot imagine. I think, maybe, this is the right time for me to move on, but I can‘t forget the day when you dumped me, because it was my birthday-the day after Valentine´s day. How could you treat me like this?!
You said we broke up because of the disagreement of your parents´ <em>disapproval</em>, and you would love me even <em>if </em><em></em>we were apart. Aha, all bullshit!

 

Aw sorry! They´re a bastard. But good work. :)

August 27, 2013
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