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Movie
Hi,
I´m currently at home. I am watching in TV; a Tom Cruise movie is on. The title is "Nigth and Day". There are bad and good persons the good guys and the bad guys, as all the similar to most movies.
Cameron Díaz is an actriz actress that I really like very much. Tom Cruise is also a good actor too.
It's "Night and Day" is an action movie. I go to do zapping for use the remote control to see other programs in on TV. I go to the kitchen because I go to do one to make a single cup of coffee. Ummmmm. That's nice!! I drink it with biscuits. The coffee is hot and very, very sweet.
Some notes: You don't need "currently", it's not required but sounds better.
Also, instead of saying "very, very", you can say "extremely".
Movie
Hi.
I´m at home, .I am watching in TV a Tom Cruise´s movie on TV. The title is "Night and day" There are bad and good persons, as in almost all the movies.
Cameron Díaz is an actress that I like very much. Tom Cruise is a good actor too. It´s an action movie. I go to do zapping(???) for so I can see other programs in TV.
I go to the kitchen because I go to do one want to make coffee. YUmmmmm. that's nice!! with biscuits.
The coffee is hot and very very sweet
Movie
Hi.
I´m at home. I am watching in TV a Tom Cruise´s movie on TV. The title is "Night and Day" There are bad and good characters,as in every movies.
Cameron Díaz is an actress that I llike very much. Tom Cruise is an good actor too. It´s an action movie. I start zapping to see other programs on TV.
I go to the kitchen because I want to make coffee. Ummmmm. That's nice!! With biscuits!
The coffee is hot and very, very sweet.
I haven't seen the film, but the coffee sounds good!
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