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Ophelia I like this painting. Therefore I want to share my knowledge about it with you. Ophelia is a painting by British artist Sir John Everett Millais, who was a member of the Pre-Raphaelite brotherhood. It depicts Ophelia, a character from Shakespeare's play Hamlet. Ophelia was a beloved of the Prince Hamlet. Having known he had slain her father Polonius she went mad. She was gathering flowers and fell into the river from a tree overhanging it. We can see the flowers in the painting, this is a special language of flowers, according to which each flower carries a symbolic meaning. The red poppy represents sleep and death. The painting is known for its depiction of the detailed flora, the nature is depicted with botanical precision. That is a distinguishing feature of the Pre-Raphaelites. An interesting fact. 19 years old Elizabeth Siddal modelled for Ophelia. Being clothed in a dress she lay in a bath. As it was winter, the artist placed oil lamps under the bath to warm the water. But this didn’t worked so that Elizabeth Siddal caught a severe cold and later her father demanded the recovery of medical expenses.

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Ophelia

I like this painting. Therefore I want to share my knowledge about it with you.

Ophelia is a painting by British artist Sir John Everett Millais, who was a member of the Pre-Raphaelite brotherhood. It depicts Ophelia, a character from Shakespeare's play Hamlet. Ophelia was a beloved of the Prince Hamlet. Having known he had slain her father Polonius she went mad. She was gathering flowers and fell into the river from a tree overhanging it. We can see the flowers in the painting, this is a special language of flowers in which each flower carries a symbolic meaning. The red poppy represents sleep and death. The painting is known for its depiction of the detailed flora, the nature is depicted with botanical precision. That is a distinguishing feature of the Pre-Raphaelites.

An interesting fact is that 19 year old Elizabeth Siddal modelled for Ophelia. Being clothed in a dress she lay in a bath. As it was winter, the artist placed oil lamps under the bath to warm the water. But this didn’t worked so that Elizabeth Siddal caught a severe cold and later her father demanded the recovery of medical expenses.

 

I combined the first 2 sentences of the second paragraph because "An interesting fact" is not a complete sentence because it lack a verb. To be grammatically complete, a sentence must have a subject, verb, and present a complete thought. "An interesting thought" is a sentence fragment.

 

When you go into the past with "did" or "didn't" you do not need to use the past tense on the second verb.

 

Examples: "I didn't work today" (correct)

"I didn't worked today"(incorrect)

"I didn't run today"(correct)

"I didn't ran today"(incorrect)

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Ophelia

I like this painting. Therefore I want to share my knowledge about it with you.

["Ophelia"] is a painting by [the] British artist Sir John Everett Millais, who was a member of the Pre-Raphaelite brotherhood. It depicts Ophelia, a character from Shakespeare's play [, "Hamlet"]. Ophelia was [the] beloved of the Prince Hamlet. [Having been informed] or [On learning] that he had slain her father [,Polonius,] she went mad. She was gathering flowers and fell into the river from a tree overhanging it. We can see the flowers in the painting[.]  [There]  is a special language of flowers, according to which each flower carries a symbolic meaning. The red poppy represents sleep and death. The painting is known for its [detailed] depiction of [] flora, [and of nature] with botanical precision. That ["This"] sounds better to me than that here, but both will work] is a distinguishing feature of the Pre-Raphaelites.

An interesting fact[: the 19 year old] Elizabeth Siddal modelled for Ophelia. [While b]eing clothed in a dress [,] she lay in a bath. As it was winter, the artist placed oil lamps under the bath to warm the water. But this didn’t [work] so that Elizabeth Siddal caught a severe cold and later her father demanded the recovery of medical expenses.  [Instead of saying an interesting fact, you can say an interesting footnote, but both work]

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James, I think the same as you)
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She must have been freezing in that water!
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It was a pleasure! Millais skillfully managed to depict the moment elapsing between life and death.

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