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Please correct it! Summary: A Streetcar Named Desire Blanche DuBois, a schoolteacher from Mississippi, arrives at the New Orleans apartment of her pregnant sister Stella Kowalski, who is married with her husband Stanley Kowalski. Blanche tells Stella that she lost their noble home called Belle Reve. Her heavily drinking is a sign that all is not well with Blanche. During the stay at her sister’s apartment Blanche get involved in a disagreement between Stella und Stanley which ends that Stanley beats Stella up. The two sisters escape to the neighbor’s apartment but a short while later Stella returns to Stanly. Blanche tries to convince her sister to leave her husband for a better man whose social status is as equal as Stellas. Blanche dates Mitch who is one of the poker friends from Stanly. At Blanches birthday Stanley tells the guests about Blanches past and also that she lost her job because she had an affair with a teenage student. Mitch broke up with her and Stanlys birthday present was a one way ticket back to Mississippi. In the evening at her birthday Blanche sits alone, drunken at home when suddenly Mitch arrives. Mitch tried to have sex with Blanche. Later Stanly comes home from hospital and Blanches was even more drunk. She tells him a story which wasn’t real but Stanly was so happy about his baby that he didn’t mind. Stanly carries her to bed an maybe he rapes her in that night. Weeks later a doctor and a nurse arrives and take Blanche in an insane asylum but Blanche believes that she will spend her entire life with a millionaire.
Jan 6, 2014 7:22 PM
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Summary: A Streetcar Named Desire

Blanche DuBois, a schoolteacher from Mississippi, arrives at the New Orleans apartment of her pregnant sister Stella Kowalski, who is married with her husband Stanley Kowalski. Blanche tells Stella that she lost their noble home called Belle Reve. Her heavily drinking is a sign that all is not well with Blanche. During the stay at her sister’s apartment, Blanche get involved in a disagreement between Stella und Stanley which ends in Stanley beating Stella up. The two sisters escape to the neighbor’s apartment, but a short while later Stella returns to Stanley. Blanche tries to convince her sister to leave her husband for a better man whose social status is as equal to Stella's. Blanche dates Mitch, who is one of the poker friends of Stanley. At Blanche's birthday, Stanley tells the guests about Blanche's past and also that she lost her job because she had an affair with a teenage student. Mitch breaks up with her and Stanley's birthday present was a one-way ticket back to Mississippi. In the evening, at her birthday, Blanche sits alone, drunken at home, when suddenly Mitch arrives. Mitch tried to have sex with Blanche. Later Stanley comes home from hospital and Blanches is even more drunk. She tells him a story which wasn’t real, but Stanley is so happy about his baby that he doesn’t mind. Stanley carries her to bed and possibly he rapes her in that night.

Weeks later, a doctor and a nurse arrive and take Blanche in an insane asylum, but Blanche believes that she will spend her entire life with a millionaire.

 

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January 6, 2014

Please correct it!

Summary: A Streetcar Named Desire

Blanche DuBois, a schoolteacher from Mississippi, arrives at the New Orleans apartment of her pregnant sister Stella Kowalski, who is married with her husband Stanley Kowalski. Blanche tells Stella that she lost their noble home called Belle Reve. Her heavily heavy drinking is a sign that all is not well with Blanche. During the stay at her sister’s apartment, Blanche gets involved in a disagreement between Stella und and Stanley, which ends that with Stanley beats beating Stella up (You don't have to get rid of "up", but it sounds more formal if you do). The two sisters escape to the their neighbor’s apartment, but a short while later Stella returns to Stanley. Blanche tries to convince her sister to leave her husband for a better man whose social status is as equal as equal to Stellas. Blanche dates Mitch who is one of the poker friends from Stanly Stanley's poker friends. At Blanche's birthday, Stanley tells the guests about Blanche's past and also that she lost her job because she had an affair with a teenage student. Mitch broke breaks (don't mix up your tenses) up with her and Stanley's birthday present to her was is a one way ticket back to Mississippi. In On the evening at of her birthday, Blanche sits alone and drunken at home when suddenly Mitch arrived Mitch suddenly arrives. Mitch and tries to have sex with Blanche her. Later, Stanley comes home from hospital and Blanches was is even more drunk. She tells him a story which wasn’t isn't real, but Stanley was is so happy about his baby that he didn’t doesn't mind. Stanley carries her to bed and maybe he possibly rapes her in that night.

Weeks later, a doctor and a nurse arrives and to take Blanche in to an insane asylum, but Blanche believes that she will spend her entire life with a millionaire.

January 7, 2014
Sorry, but I left out one - "...and a nurse arrive and take Blanch to an insane asylum..."
January 6, 2014
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