Evgeny
My letter You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: • explain the reason for the party • give the date and time of the party • suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Dear Alice, I am writing this letter to invite you to a birthday surprise party that I am planning to hold next weekend. Do you know our new student? His name is Peter and he has been studying in our school for a month now. I bumped to him yesterday and he was feeling blue. I think it’s because of he misses home. As international students, we know that it takes time to adjust to the culture and lifestyle of another country. I found out that Peter’s birthday will be next Saturday and I think that this party will really cheer him up. So birthday bash will start at 6 p.m. in our room next Saturday! We will need a lot of things for this party such as food, drinks, music and some balloons. And also we will need someone to decorate a room for the party. So we need all the help that we can get. Moreover we all know you as a great cook. As a favor, maybe you can create your famous birthday cake for the event. I think it would be a great surprise for the celebrant! I look forward to your reply. And I hope you would be able to join us in this meaningful event. Sincerely yours, Eugene.
Jan 27, 2014 1:50 PM
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My letter


Dear Alice,

I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise birthday party that I am planning to hold next weekend. Do you know our new student, His name is Peter? He has been studying in our school for a month now. I bumped into him yesterday and he was feeling blue. I think it’s because of he misses home. As international students, we know that it takes time to adjust to the culture and lifestyle of another country. I found out that Peter’s birthday is next Saturday and I think that a party will really cheer him up. So the 'birthday bash' will start at 6 p.m. in our room, next Saturday! 


We will need a lot of things for this party, such as food, drinks, music and some balloons. We also need someone to decorate the room and need all the help that we can get. Moreover, we all know you as a great cook, and as a favor, maybe you could create your famous birthday cake for the event. I think it would be a great surprise for the celebrant!

I look forward to your reply. And I hope you would be able to can join us in this meaningful event.

Sincerely yours,

Eugene

 

 

Good effort!

January 27, 2014
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