My letter
Dear Alice,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise birthday party that I am planning to hold next weekend. Do you know our new student, His name is Peter? He has been studying in our school for a month now. I bumped into him yesterday and he was feeling blue. I think it’s because of he misses home. As international students, we know that it takes time to adjust to the culture and lifestyle of another country. I found out that Peter’s birthday is next Saturday and I think that a party will really cheer him up. So the 'birthday bash' will start at 6 p.m. in our room, next Saturday!
We will need a lot of things for this party, such as food, drinks, music and some balloons. We also need someone to decorate the room and need all the help that we can get. Moreover, we all know you as a great cook, and as a favor, maybe you could create your famous birthday cake for the event. I think it would be a great surprise for the celebrant!
I look forward to your reply. And I hope you would be able to can join us in this meaningful event.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene
Good effort!