I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang.. I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my best friend Polly who wants to meet me. So I told her to achieve me on the beach. 30 minutes late

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I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang.. I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my best friend Polly who wants to meet me. So I told her to achieve me on the beach. 30 minutes later she arrived and laid next to me on the sand. She looked very sad and suddenly she starts crying and then she explained me that she had had an argument with Tom, his boyfriend. So I supported her and then we went to a nearby bar to take a cappuccino. While we were drinking our cappuccino my phone rang again. It was Tom who was calling for a suggestion for reconciling with Polly. I suggested him to come to the bar near the beach and make his apologises to Polly. When he arrived I left him alone with Polly. Then I came to the beach to finally have relax and getting tan but first of all I turned off my mobile!

Mar 13, 2014 7:15 PM

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I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang..

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my best friend Polly who wanted (wants) to meet me. So, I told her she could meet (to achieve) me on the beach. 30 minutes later she arrived and lay (laid) next to me on the sand. She looked very sad and suddenly started to cry, (she starts crying and then she) explaining (explained me that) she had had an argument with Tom, her (his) boyfriend. So, I supported her and then we went to a nearby bar to take a cappuccino. While we were drinking our cappuccinos my phone rang again. It was Tom who was calling to suggest a reconciliation (for a suggestion for reconciling) with Polly. I suggested he (him to) come to the bar near the beach and make his apologies (apologises) to Polly. When he arrived I left him alone with Polly. Then I returned (came) to the beach to finally relax once more (have relax) and get a tan (getting tan) but, first of all, I turned off my mobile!

Haha..... nicely written. So, as well as relaxing, you had to time to be a good samaritan to your friend.

March 13, 2014

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang..

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my best friend Polly who wants wanted to meet me. So I told her to achieve join me on the beach. 30 minutes later she arrived and laid lay down next to me on the sand. She looked very sad and suddenly she starts started crying. and Then she explained me that she had had an argument with Tom, his her boyfriend. So I supported comforted her and then we went to a nearby bar to take have a cappuccino. While we were drinking our cappuccino my phone rang again. It was Tom who was calling for a suggestion on how to reconcile for reconciling with Polly. I suggested that he meet us at him to come to the bar near the beach and apologise make his apologises to Polly. When he arrived I left the two of the alone togetherhim alone with Polly. Then I came returned to the beach to finally have relax and getting a tan but, first of all, I turned off my mobile!

March 13, 2014

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang..

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my best friend Polly who wants wanted to meet me. So, I told her to achieve meet me on the beach. 30 minutes later she arrived and laid lay down next to me on the sand. She looked very sad and suddenly she starts started crying and then she explained to me that she had had an argument with Tom, his her boyfriend. So I supported her and then we went to a nearby bar to take have a cappuccino. While we were drinking our cappuccinos my phone rang again. It was Tom who was calling for a suggestion for reconciling with Polly. I suggested for him to come to the bar near the beach and make his apologises apologise to Polly. When he arrived I left him alone with Polly. Then I came went to the beach to finally have relax and getting a tan but first of all, I turned off my mobile!