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Nelly
Tattoo expo This weekend my best friend an I go to a tattoo expo, we are fans of tattoos, I would have many tattoos, I think they are beautiful, but many people believe it is only a manifestation of offenders. In many jobs we hide our tattoos because they are not accepted, what I consider discrimination. http://www.expotattoosantiago.cl/
May 16, 2014 8:34 PM
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Tattoo Expo

This weekend my best friend and I are going to a Tattoo Expo, we are fans of tattoos., I would like to   have many tattoos, I think they are beautiful, but many people believe it is only a manifestation of offenders.

In many jobs we hide our tattoos because they are not acceptable accepted, what I consider this discrimination.

http://www.expotattoosantiago.cl/

May 16, 2014

     Tattoo Exposition

     This weekend my best friend and I are going to a tattoo exposition. We are tattoo fanatics fans of tattoos, and I would like to have many a lot of tattoos. I think that they are beautiful, but many people believe it is only a manifestation of offenders think that tattoos are offensive. 
     In many jobs we must hide cover our tattoos, because they are not considered acceptable. This is what I consider to be tattoo discrimination.

<em>     Nelly, I recommend that you consider beginning new sentences after you write a complete thought. You are using too many comma splices. That said; this is a common issue with tattoo enthusiasts. I have seven tattoos myself, and the recourse to the business side of tattoo display is that we must choose to work with business that value self-expression. I hope to read all about your time at the expo! 
     Recomiendo que se tiene en cuenta el inicio de nuevas condenas después de escribir un pensamiento completo. Está utilizando demasiados empalmes por comas. Una vez dicho esto; este es un problema común entre los entusiastas del tatuaje. Tengo siete tatuajes mí mismo, y el recurso a la parte comercial de exhibición de tatuajes es que debemos elegir trabajar con las empresas que valoran la auto-expresión. Espero poder leer todo acerca de su tiempo en la expo!</em>

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Regards,</em>

<em>Dan </em>

May 17, 2014
I congratulate Marica on your decision to tattoo. I have two tattos but I have to hide them at work
May 16, 2014
I think tattoos are beautiful too! Next week I'll have my first one, and I'm so excited ** I live in Italy and here is difficult find some kind of jobs if you're tattooed :/
May 16, 2014
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