johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo zai xue le liangnian de Zhongwen. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta xianzai yijing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing. Wo zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian ye qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan de dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. Wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, he feichang lan de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Albany de fayin shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao shuo liuli de zhongwen. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui zhongwen? (What does your "jie shengci" mean? )

So cool! I corrected a whole pinyin notebook entry.^^

johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo <strike>zai</strike> xue Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta yijing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta qushi shi 86 sui <strike>le</strike>. Ta you xinzangbing <strike>le</strike>. Wo zuihao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo neng kan yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. Wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, he feichang lan de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Fayin de Albany shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao liuli de shuo zhongwen. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu. Wo xi huan pijiu. Wo xi huan weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo <strike>de</strike> zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ban de Sugelanren, yi ban de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. (Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen? what does ur mean?)

johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo yijing xue Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chusheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le. Ta 86 sui le. Ta you xinzangbing . Wo zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qunian qushi le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo neng kan yidian pinyin. Wo xiang qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. wo de laopo you jinse de tou fa, ye you yishuang shenlanse de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge nuer, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. Albany de Fayin shi "A- la - ban - yi" ,bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang  shuo liuli de zhongwen . Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu,pijiu he weishiji. "drambuie" shi wo zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi yi ge putong de Sugelanren, yeshi yige putong de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen?

johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo <strike>zai</strike> xue xi Zhongwen liang nian le. Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chu sheng zai Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi yisheng. Ta <strike>shi</strike>  yi jing 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian qushi le ,xiang nian <strike>Ta shi </strike>86 sui <strike>le</strike>. Ta you xinzangbing <strike>le</strike>. Wo <strike>de</strike> zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, dan shi ta qu nian ye qushi <strike>qunian </strike>le. Wo kan bu dong hanzi. Wo kan dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang yao qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de laopo bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de laopo shi qi ma jiao lian. <strike>Ta de laopo</strike> ta you jinse de tou fa, <strike>ye feichang </strike>he lan se de yanjing. Wo you liang ge haizi, yi ge n<strike>u</strike>ver, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany.<strike> Fayin de</strike> Albany de fa yin shi "A- la - ban - yi" bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang yao liuli de shuo zhongwen<strike> de liuli</strike>. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu,<strike>Wo xi huan</strike> pijiu<strike>. Wo xi huan</strike> he weishiji jiu. "drambuie" shi wo de zui<strike> xi huan de jiu </strike>ai. Wo shi <strike>yi ban de</strike> yi ge pu tong de  Sugelanren, <strike>yi ban</strike> pu tong de Yingguoren. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo. Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu hui jie shengci de zhongwen?(I don't know what this sentence means)

johnboon49's notebook entry: Dec 06, 2010

Ni hao, wo jiao Yuehan. Wo <strike>zai</strike> yijing xue le liangnian de Zhongwen . Wo shi ge chuxuezhe. Wo xuyao bangzhu. Wo chu sheng yu Yingguo. Wo de fuqin yiqian shi wei yisheng. Ta jinnian 97 sui le. Wo de muqin qunian yin xinzangbin qushi le. Ta <strike>shi </strike>  xiangnian 86 sui . <strike>Ta you xinzangbing le</strike>. Wo <strike>de</strike> zui hao de pengyou shi wo de daishu, danshi ta qunian qushi le. Wo <strike>kan </strike>bu dong hanzi. Wo <strike>kan</strike> zhi dong yidian pinyin. Wo xiang <strike>yao</strike> qu Zhongguo. Wo xi huan Zhongguo, danshi wo de <strike>laopo</strike>  qizi bu xi huan Zhongguo. Wo de <strike>laopo</strike> qizi shi qi ma jiao lian. Ta <strike>de laopo </strike>you yitou jinse de toufa, <strike>ye feichang</strike> yishuang  lanse de yanjing. Wo you liangge haizi, yi ge nuer, yi ge erzi. Wo zhu zai Albany. <strike>Fayin de Albany </strike> pinxie shi "A- la - ban - yi" , er bu shi "O - le - ban -yi". Ni ming bai le ma? Wo xiang <strike>yao </strike>shuo yikou liuli de zhongwen <strike>de liuli</strike>. Wo juede Zhongwen hen nan. Wo xi huan hong putao jiu ,<strike>. Wo xi </strike>huan pijiu<strike>. Wo xi huan </strike> he weishiji <strike>jiu. </strike> "drambuie" shi wo <strike>de </strike>zui xi huan de jiu. Wo shi <strike>yi ban </strike> putong de Sugelanren, <strike>yi ban de Yingguoren</strike>. Wo you shuang chong guoji - Aodaliya he Yinguo guoji . Wo ai Aodaliya. Wei shenme wo bu <strike>hui</strike> lijie zhongwen zhong de shengci <strike>de zhongwen</strike>?