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creating a green campus nowadays,in order to give our students one perfect place for study,creating a green campus is very important thing.the green campus could made us into a better schoolyard to live and learn the konwledge. the green campus not only point that which nice enviroment,but also has the health cultural and green behaves and etc. in order to building our green campus,firstly,we should keep our campus's clear and keep on the better lifestyle;secondly,the school or institution should teaching and noticing to the teachers and students the importantance of creating a green campus for school,finally,we should take the relationship of classmates and teachers,building a good enviroment of communication. after all.we work hard above-mentioned.then we can creating a green campus.

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creating a green campus

nowadays,in order to give our students one perfect place for study,creating a green campus is very important thing.the green campus could made us into a better schoolyard to live and learn the konwledge. the green campus not only point that which nice enviroment,but also has the health cultural and green behaves and etc.
in order to building our green campus,firstly,we should keep our campus's clear and keep on the better lifestyle;secondly,the school or institution should teaching and noticing to the teachers and students the importantance of creating a green campus for school,finally,we should take the relationship of classmates and teachers,building a good enviroment of communication.
after all.we work hard above-mentioned.then we can creating a green campus.

Creating a Green Campus

Nowadays, in order to give our students a perfect place for studying by creating a green campus. It is a very important thing a green campus can make it into a better schoolyard to live and learn the konwledge. A green campus not only points that which nice environment, but also has the health cultural and green behaves and etc. * I am not certain what you are talking about here.*
In order to built a green campus, first, we should need keep our campus clean and keep on a better lifestyle.

Second, the school or institution should teaching and noticing to the all teachers and students the importance of creating a green campus for school.

Finally, we should take the relationship of classmates and teachers by building a good environment of communication.
After all, we need to work hard above-mentioned. Then we are able to create a greener campus.

** if t his is an essay, you need to add more details for each paragraph. this  is a good start. Just remember to capitalize the first letter of each new sentence and a space between the word and the period.  if not. this is a pretty good entry.**

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