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HOME WORK I, HOW ARE YOU?, HERE I AM, TODAY I AM GOING TO WRITE A SHORT REPORT, YESTERDAY, WE WERE WACHED THAT SOCCER GAME IN AT HOME OF MY FRIEND DIEGO, HE IS FROM MEXICO AND HIS WIFE ARE FROM AUSTRIA, THEY HAVE A SON THEIR SON IS THE BEST FRIEND OF MY SON BRUNO, THEY GO TO SAME CLASS IN SCHOOL AND THEY PLAY TO MUCH TIME TOGETHER BUT SOME TIME THEY FIGTH AND YOU KNOW KIDS ARE KIDS BUT AFTER FIVE MINUTES EVERYTHING ARE RIGHT, SEE YOU ALARIC, TODAY I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN GO TO ENGLISH AND SPANISH EXCHANGE BECAUSE I AM BUSY.
Jul 14, 2014 3:42 PM
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HOME WORK

I, HOW ARE YOU? HERE I AM. TODAY I AM GOING TO WRITE A SHORT REPORT. YESTERDAY, WE WERE watching THAT SOCCER GAME IN AT the HOME OF MY FRIEND, DIEGO. HE IS FROM MEXICO AND HIS WIFE is FROM AUSTRIA. THEY HAVE A SON THEIR SON who IS THE BEST FRIEND OF MY SON, BRUNO. THEY GO TO the SAME CLASS IN SCHOOL AND THEY PLAY togther much of the time. BUT sometimes THEY fight AND, YOU KNOW, KIDS ARE KIDS, BUT AFTER FIVE MINUTES EVERYTHING is alright. SEE YOU ALARIC. TODAY I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN GO TO ENGLISH AND SPANISH EXCHANGE BECAUSE I AM BUSY.

 

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July 14, 2014
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