My last year
In my first semester, I took part in many interesting contest such as host competition and fun games except that I joined student union and participated to organized various activities about English.
During this semester, my roommates are like families taking care of each other, and I adapted to this new environment gradually, but I was still lost whether I should make better use of time and resources to study hard or spent time on student union.
In my second semester, I decided to quit the student union that isn’t practical and virtual I think and what I really want to do is enrich my extracurricular knowledge by reading some books.
Certainly, I read the history of Ming dynasty but it’s not enough because I wasted much time on shopping, playing and eating special food, which not only didn’t satisfy me but also made me feel vacuous.
Generally speaking, for my English level still didn’t improve, my last year was on the loaf, so I really want to be a kite that someone can draw the string to lead me flying higher and farther bravely.
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My last final year
In my first semester, I took part in many interesting contests such as host competition (?) and fun games except that. I also joined the student union and participated to in organizing various activities about English based activities.
During That semester, my roommates are were like a family taking care of each other, and. I adapted to this new environment gradually, but I was still lost unsure whether if I should make better use of my time and resources to study hard, or spend more time on the student union.
In my second semester, I decided to quit the student union that since it wasn’t practical and virtual I think (?) and. What I really want to do is enrich my extracurricular knowledge by reading some books.
Certainly Of course, I read about the history of the Ming dynasty but it’s was not enough because I wasted so much time on shopping, playing and eating special <'good food' sounds more natural> food, which not only didn’t satisfy me but also made me feel vacuous.
Generally speaking, for my English level still didn’t improve, my last year was on the loaf, so I really want to be a kite that someone can draw the string to lead me flying higher and farther bravely. (?)
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you have a wonderful campus life without any regret.
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