Self introduction

Hallo Hello:)
My name is Moe Saito.
I live in Tokyo Japan. But I'm from Aomori.
I came to Tokyo to enter study in the university.
I am studying for cancer at university. It's very interesting to me.

My hobby is watching anime.
I am crazy about anime.

My favorite anime show is called "Love live".
It's a story that about a high school student that becomes an idol.

I want to visit foreign country.
I want to make a lot of friends.

self introduction

Hallo:)

I assume you know that is spelled incorrectly :) (but just in case, it's hello)

My name is Moe Saito.
I live in Tokyo Japan. But I'm from Aomori.
I came to Tokyo to enter the university study at a university here.

I am studying for cancer at university. It is very interesting to me.

"at university" removed because of context from previous sentence.

My hobby is watching anime.
I am crazy about an anime called "Love live".
It is a story that of a high school student who becomes an idol. 

I want to visit a foreign country. (just to clarify, this means any foreign country)
I want to make a lot of friends.

頑張って！

self introduction

Hello:)
My name is Moe Saito.
I live in Tokyo, Japan, but I'm from Aomori.
I came to Tokyo to attend university.
I am studying cancer at university. It is very interesting to me.

My hobby is watching anime.
I am crazy about an anime called "Love Live".
It is a story about a high school student who becomes an idol.

I want to visit foreign country.
I want to make a lot of friends.

Self introduction

Hello:)
My name is Moe Saito.
I live in Tokyo Japan, but I'm from Aomori.
I came to Tokyo for the university study.
I am studying for cancer in the university. It is very interesting to me.

My hobby is watching anime.
I am crazy about an anime called "Love live".
It is a story about that a group of high school students (there are many students like Honoka, Eri, Kotori, etc) becoming s an idol group.

I want to visit foreign countries. (again plurals) 
I want to make a lot of friends.