Search from various English teachers...
芸芝
Note 7 很高兴 今天在异地住的高中朋友访旧了。 Today, my friend from high school who lives in another city came to visit me. 看见她我很高兴了。 I was happy to see her. 我想了给她买非常好吃很贵的菜,可她想要吃了熟铺子的切面。 I wanted to buy her a delicious and expensive meal, but she wanted to eat udon noodles at our usual place. 那里有我们美好回忆。 There we had good memories. 然后我们买东西去了。 Then, we went shopping. 我们喝了真不好吃的咖啡和买了化妆品。 We drank coffee that tasted terrible and bought some cosmetics. 一切都是一样的高中的时候,但是那些年我们喝过可乐。 Everything was all the same as our high school days, but then we used to drink coke. It’s still confusing where to put ‘了’, so I put them anywhere. 哈哈。Hope you guys can help me a little bit. 与往常一样,谢谢你的帮助。
Mar 7, 2015 8:19 PM
Corrections · 2
1

Note 7 很高兴

今天在异地住的高中朋友访旧见面了。
Today, my friend from high school who lives in another city came to visit me.
【访旧 is little strange to put here we rarely use 访旧 in this way, it is the short version of 访问旧友=访问以前的朋友, and it is only used when you emphaisizes the particular event of visiting old friends. Here we can use 访问、拜访、见面 instead】


看见她我很高兴
I was happy to see her.

【We do not use 了 in this sentence.】

我想给她买非常好吃而且很贵的菜,可她想要吃熟铺子的切面。
I wanted to buy her a delicious and expensive meal, but she wanted to eat udon noodles at our usual place.

【了 after a verb is only used when you want to strongly emphensize the action is completed, you want to buy he a meal yeas your action is completed but here you empehsize the meal is delicious and expensive, right?

She wants to eat udon so she does not complete the action of having eaten the udon, so we do not use 了 here】

那里有我们美好回忆。
There we had good memories.

【Very good completedly right no mistakes at all↖(^ω^)↗】

然后我们买东西去了。
Then, we went shopping.

【You put the right 了 in the right place! Here you have completed the action of 去买东西 and want to emphasize the action of  go shopping. This sentence can also be written as 然后我们去买东西了。

The trick here is that it is actually the combination of two sentences, 我们去(走)了+我们买东西. Which action do you want to emphasize? Leave to shop, or shopping itself? Obviously you completed both actions but emphasize the action of leaving to shop.】

我们喝了不好的咖啡买了化妆品。
We drank coffee that tasted terrible and bought some cosmetics.

【You put 了 in the right place again congratulations! But we use 不好喝 to describe coffee because coffee can only be drunk not eaten right? We also use ',' instead of 和 because 喝 and 买 are two different actions. 】


一切都是一样的高中的时候,但是那些年我们喝过可乐。
Everything was all the same as our high school days, but then we used to drink coke.

一切都和我们高中的时候一样,但是那些年我们喝可乐。

一切...一样 but not  一样的高中。 And here you emphasize the event that you drink coke with your friends, but not not the action itself (喝可乐)。 (喝咖啡)】

It’s still confusing where to put ‘了’, so I put them anywhere. 哈哈。Hope you guys can help me a little bit.
与往常一样,谢谢你的帮助。


Hi Yunji, overall very good I as a Chinese can perfectly understand what you wish to express to me!If you have any further questions, post here or email me individually I am always here to help you

加油↖(^ω^)↗

March 7, 2015
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!