Jealousy

I had felt jealous of Ying, one of my best friends. I think I am prettier than her. My family is better than hers. Why does she get a good boyfriend but I don’t? Every time she talked about her boyfriend, the jealousy increased.

Yet, yesterday I gave her my best way to keep skin smooth. I felt regret afterwards. “Is it ok for me tell her that secret way?” I asked my mom.

“It’s totally Ok,” mom answered.

“Have you ever felt jealous of anyone?” I asked.

“No,” mom said.

“You are the best among your friends,” I said with bitterness. If my mom was worse than her friends, she would not have felt jealous of her friends, because she knows that feeling jealous is pointless. 

Whatever, I consider myself as a normal human being, not God, and jealousy will come and go.

In English, whenever the speaker changes, a new paragraph has to be started.

Jealousy

I had felt jealous of Ying, one of my best friends. I know I'm prettier than her. My family is better than hers. ["better than her" is implied and does not need to be stated] So why does she have a good boyfriend while I don’t. Every time she talkes about her boyfriend, my jealousy increases. 

Yet, yesterday I gave her my best skin smoothening secret yesterday. I felt regretted it afterwards.

“Is it ok for me tell her the secret?” I asked my mom.

“It’s totally OK,” mom answered.

“Have you ever felt jealous of anyone?” I asked,

“None,” mom said.

“You are the best amongst your friends,” I said with bitterly. 

If my mom was worse than her friends, she would have not felt jealous of her friends, because she knows that jealously feeling is pointless.

Whatever! I consider myself as a normal human being, not God, and jealously feeling will come and go.

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Jealousy

I had felt jealous of Ying, one of my best friends. I think I am prettier than her; my family is better than hers. Why but why does she has a better get a good boyfriend? but I don’t. [It's called the Law of Equilization or 前世冤孽債 LOL] Every Each time she talked raved about her boyfriend, the my jealousy increased.

Yet, yesterday I gave her my best way recipie for to keeping the skin smooth. I felt regreted afterwards.  

“Is it ok for me to tell her that my secret? way,”

I asked my mom.

“It’s totally Ok,”

She repliedmom answered.

“Have Don't you ever felt feel jealous of anyone?”

I asked once more. ,

“None one,” mom said.

Came the reply again.

“You are the best among your friends,”

I said with bitterness.

If my Even if mom was the worst among worse than her friends, she would have not felt be jealous of her friends, anyone as because she knows that jealous feeling it is pointless.

Whatever, I consider myself as Being no saint but a mere mortal, normal human being not God and jealousy feeling will comes and goes in my life.